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For this paper, you will make an argument from the pictire or series of pictures you took.

You will need to examine the following
linguistic signs
duality
agreement

icon
index
symbol

firstness
secondness
thirdness


connotation
denotation
Myth

Conclusion
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This revision will entail the following:

Carefully read your peer's paper without marking on it--you know, to get a good sense of the paper.

Next, make suggestions for addition, deletion, and rearrangement of important information on the theme, paragrph, word, and sentence.

So, on a seperate sheet of paper you should write your suggestions for revision.

Example:

Theme

I suggest you add, delete, or rearrange the following

Paragraph

In the third paragraph on page 2, I sugest you add the following...

Sentence

I suggest you delete the thirs sentence in the second paragrpah and add the following one:

Word

This word seems too contrived, so i suggest you change it to a word more appropriate...


Class, the final paper will be due next Friday!
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http://www.panoramas.dk/fullscreen3/f1.html

Now, click on the new years video...

The essay needs 3 sections:

1. An Introduction that talks about the benefits of cluster criticism, ending with a thesis statement about the author's worldview

2. A section where you ID the key terms (please sekect two key terms) with an explanation that is more than a simple sentence.

3. How the key terms contribute to the world views
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Revision Strategies

I define Revision is at examining, editing, and re-conceiving of text for ideas and content.

There are two types of revisions, Global and Local.

Global revision asks us to revise for theme, or the text as a whole.

Local Revision asks us to revise for grammar, mechanics, and word choices.

There are four (4) areas of a text that we can revise:

• Theme—the theme, argument, or idea of a text.
• Paragraph—we can revise individual and multiple paragraphs
• Sentence—we can revise individual and multiple sentences
• Word—we can revise individual or multiple words

Within these four areas of a text, there are four (4) ways we can revise:

• Addition—we can add meaningful information
• Deletion—we can delete irrelevant information
• Substitution—we can substitute words, as long as we don’t substitute with Jargon
• Rearrangement—we can rearrange paragraphs, sentences, words, and ideas
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Introduction

Today, I come before you to introduce our writing workshop. For the next two weeks we will be learning about writing and practicing inventing, drafting, and revising our work. Today, I want to talk specifically about invention. I will begin by defining invention in both popular and scholarly terms; then, I will examine an essay by Peter Elbow, Emeritus professor of rhetoric and composition at UMASS-Amherst, titled “Three Mysteries at the Heart of Writing” because Elbow invites us to consider invention in the twenty-first century; Finally, I will show invention in action to you by providing examples from in-classroom activities authored by other teachers.

Invention in Scholarly Terms and Popular Terms

In scholarly terms, Invention is the first of the five cannons of rhetoric. Gideon O. Burton, author of the web site Silva Rhetoricae, cites invention as “finding something to say.” Burton continues his examination on invention by noting:

[There are] Certain common categories of thought [that] became conventional to use in order to brainstorm for material. These common places (places = topoi in Greek) are called the "topics of invention." They include, for example, cause and effect, comparison, and various relationships.

Invention describes the argumentative, persuasive core of rhetoric. Aristotle, in fact, defines rhetoric primarily as invention, "discovering the best available means of persuasion." (“Burton”)

On Wikipedia, a popular online encyclopedia where users can add and change knowledge on practically any subject, Invention is being currently defined as “an object, process or technique which displays an element of novelty” (“Invention”). In this respect, the process or technique of invention gives us the ability to breathe new life into art, music, literature, and ways to share our lived experiences.

Three Mysteries at the Heart of Writing

Now that we have looked at invention in popular and scholarly terms, I want to now examine Peter Elbow’s essay “Three Mysteries at the Heart of Writing.” Elbow’s argument in his essay is that we need to “explore a realm of rhetoric that had been largely ignored for a long time, namely invention” (10). We can better explore invention when we unmask his three mysteries.

Mystery # 1: From No Words to Words

We go from no words to words. How do we do that? Elbow enumerates three invention strategies for us to give ourselves words.

1) Talk to someone—not to get input from them but to get interaction with them, and above all, good listening
2) Freewriting—push yourself to write or keep writing even when you don’t have words in mind. You can freewrite privately in a bound journal or make a private post in your livejournal. Elbow reminds us that we must give Freewriting a chance and engage ourselves in Freewriting with some regularity. Sometimes you may only be able to freewrite for five minutes, but other times you may freewrite for twenty minutes. (10-13)

Mystery # 2: Figuring Out What We Really Mean

Sometimes we listen to a lecture. Sometimes a lecture like the one you are receiving now. Sometimes a more important lecture from an author, songwriter, of politician. We ask might ask ourselves: how did that speaker know that his or her words weren’t what he or she really meant to say? Elbow calls this knowing Felt Sense. Felt Sense is a nonverbal sense we have that dictates what we say and what we write. And, Elbow argues, writers must focus on Felt Sense as part of our writing process. He expresses:

• We find ourselves uttering words for some idea or insight or feeling on our mind
• The we pause to attend inward felt sense—and often we notice that our words don’t quite say what we were trying to say
• We welcome that felt sense of mismatch and put attention on it charitably as a nonverbal experience
• From that nonverbal and bodily experience, we invite new words—and they usually get us closer to our meaning-intention (13-16)

Mystery # 3: Words That Give

In his final mystery, Elbow invites us to use intonation in our work. He writes that “some writing makes less work for us by somehow making us seem to hear the meaning coming to us from the silent words on the page” (16).

He asks us to read the following to passages:

[Passage One]

[Passage Two]

Intonation is the key to writing words that audiences can hear because intonation “embodies in language a rhythm and melody of meaning” (17).

How do we, as writers, make sure we use intonation in our work? One possible strategy that Elbow gives us—and that I agree is important---is reading aloud: The sound of written words when recited has an important effect on silent readers.

So, there you have it. Three mysteries of writing unmasked: From no words to words, figuring out what we really mean, and using words that give. These three mysteries, I believe, are important suggestions for inexperienced and experienced writers alike.
Examples of Invention in the Classroom

I want to end this lecture on Invention with some invention strategies used by myself and other teachers in our classrooms in hopes that you will feel comfortable enough using them yourself in your own writing.

From Patricia Dunn and Kathleen Dunn De Mers Kairos article “Reversing Notions of Disability and Accommodation: Embracing Universal Design in Writing Pedagogy and Web Space”


http://english.ttu.edu/kairos/7.1/binder2.html?coverweb/dunn_demers/index.html

Dunn and Dunn De Mers talk about invention in the form of Sketching. They argue:

Sketching is a great way to respond to complex readings. Even primitive drawings or graphs can help people conceptualize complex ideas and contrasting views before they write about them. Sketching, like freewriting, can also help people not only generate ideas, but also help them begin to conceptualize how they might organize, or reorganize, their early or developing drafts
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Peer Review Partners ENGW 1302.17

Darling/Drew

Dustin/Amy

Jide/Kathleen

Elizabeth/Claire

Bryan/Megan

Kateri//Evanline

Bruce/Anna Brooks

Emily/Sarah

Taylor/John

Anna/Hoffman

Pamela/Marleigh

Peer Review Partners ENGW 1302.12

Thomas Barton/Ryan Centi

Charles Dansby/ Christopher Fey

Christopher Fuller/Alex Gavin

Elizabeth Hood/Melissa Hutchinson

Kate Incerto/Shannon Locke

Elyse Longoria/Kayla Meyer

Ryan Mura/ Sarah Nelson

Alexandra// AJ

Nadia/Dominique

Andi/Timothy

Melinda/Sarah
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Peer Review—Paper One

1. What is your Peer’s thesis statement?


2. Does your peer examine audience, purpose, and situation in the first section?

a. Who is the audience?
b. What is the purpose?
c. What is the situation?

3. Does your peer examine ethos, pathos, and logos in the second section?

a. How does your peer convey ethos?
b. How does your peer convey pathos?
c. How does your peer convey logos?

4. Does your peer have topic sentences and transitions throughout the paper?

5. Does the paper as a whole support the thesis statement?

a. Describe how or how not the evidence supports the thesis statement?

6. Does your peer provide a conclusion that contributes to answering the questions “What is rhetoric and what is composition?

a. How does your peer answer these questions?
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Rhetorical Analysis 1
Neo-Aristotelian Analysis

Audience: Matthew, Classmates

Purpose: a persuasive analysis (Persuade your argument to your audience)

Situation: There is a need for us to learn about Neo-Aristotelian analysis because it will help you produce and consume texts after college more easily and intellectually.


Assignment:

In class we have looked /will continue to looked at several texts over a wide array of genres. We have analyzed these texts for audience, purpose, situation, ethos, pathos, and logos. The first three terms help us set up what is known as The Rhetorical Problem, a problem that asks us to create an argument about the text. The last three terms are known as Classical appeals. Analyzing a text for these appeals helps us understand writer/speaker/artist, audience, and the arrangement of text.

In this assignment, I am inviting you to conduct a rhetorical analysis on the following web site:

http://tobacco.health.usyd.edu.au/site/supersite/resources/docs/gallery_posters.htm

1. Choose one of the images from the anti smoking resource page
2. very carefully follow the handout on rhetorical analysis
3. begin by writing down your first impressions
4. make an argument with a thesis statement, and then back that thesis statement up by conducting the analysis, i.e., I argue that in by producing this text anti smoking campaigns are…
5. the first section of your paper will examine audience, purpose, and situation; the second section will examine ethos, pathos, and logos.
6. make a conclusion about the work that you did and how it relates to your understanding rhetoric and composition.

I understand this assignment will be challenging, so I want you to take your time and not wait until the last minute. I am also attaching the grading standards for you to look at. Please do consider these standards while writing your analysis.
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What Is a Rhetorical Analysis and Why Conduct One?
By Matthew A. Bunce, Instructor, Michigan Technological U, Aug. 2003

One conducts a rhetorical analysis when one wants to evaluate an oral, written or visual text. This evaluation focuses on several aspects: audience, purpose, occasion, credibility and good character, emotion, logic and symmetry.

How to Conduct an A Rhetorical Analysis

The first step in conducting a rhetorical analysis is writing down everything that sticks out in your mind about a text.

The second step in conducting a rhetorical analysis is creating a hypothesis, stating what you believe the author is trying to accomplish and whether or not the author succeeds or fails. This hypothesis is only preliminary and will change after you conduct the rest of the analysis.

The third step is analyzing the author’s audience. You must conduct an audience analysis for this. You must also analyze the author’s purpose and occasion.

Here is non-comprehensive list of questions to ask yourself during step three of the rhetorical analysis.

On Audience.
Questions one will want to ask of an author’s audience:
1. Who is the author’s audience?
2. What does this audience expect from the author’s text?
3. Does the author meet the audience’s expectations successfully or not?

On Purpose.
Questions one will want to ask about the author’s purpose:
1. Does the author wish to express an idea to the audience?
2. Does the author wish to persuade the audience on a matter?
3. Does the author wish to entertain the audience?
These purposes are known as the aims of discourse.
On Occasion.
Question one will want to ask about the text’s occasion:
1. What prompted the author to produce this text?
1. Where is this text being delivered?
2. What effect does the occasion have on the author and the audience?

The Fourth step is locating and analyzing the author’s rhetorical strategies. Here is a non-comprehensive list of question to ask yourself during the fourth step of the rhetorical analysis.

The Three Classical Appeals.

1. Ethos: One must analyze the author’s credibility and good character.
a. Where does this author work? What is this author’s position?
b. Where was this author schooled?
c. What texts has this author read or written?
d. Does the author offend the audience or flatter the audience?
e. Is the author honest?

2. Pathos: One must analyze the author’s emotional appeals to the audience.
a. Does the author directly involve the reader? Does the author exclude the reader? How does either of these approaches make you feel as third party to this text?
b. Is the author’s language strong (engaging) or weak (difficult to follow)?
c. Do the author’s selected images make you, as a third party, feel a particular emotion—happy, sad, angry, puzzled?

3. Logos: One must analyze the author’s logic.
a. Does the author provide accurate facts? Are these facts stretched?
b. Are the author’s numbers correct?
c. Is the order or organization of the author’s text clear? Do you feel as though you are misinterpreting the message that the author is providing?
d. Does the reasoning proceed in a logical step-by-step, forward-moving way?

Analyzing the Visual Image

When one rhetorically analyzes the visual image, there are many aspects that one must focus on.
1. Contrast: Avoiding elements on the page that are merely similar
2. Repetition: Which visual elements are repeated in the image?
3. Alignment: Are aspects of the image placed on the page arbitrarily?
4. Proximity: Are items related to each other grouped closely?

The fifth step is to write your analysis and review and revise your hypothesis.
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